You rent a four-bedroom house which you share with two other students. However, there are several problems with this house that need fixing. You also find it expensive and would like to find another student to share the spare bedroom. Write a letter to the estate agency. In the letter: Explain your situation Describe the problem with the house Say what would you like to happen
Hello
Sir or Madam,
My friend and I rent Add the punctuation
Hello,
one
of your houses and I’m writing to inform you about some problems that we are having.
Firstly
, a
toilet in our house is in bad condition. Water Correct article usage
the
goin
always in the toilet. Correct your spelling
is
This
is bad because one
day our bathroom may flood and we also
overpay for water meters. We ask
to fix Wrong verb form
asked
this
several tames
but never Correct your spelling
times
do
it.
Wrong verb form
did
Secondly
, a lock often
broken on a main door. It is really Add a missing verb
is often
dengarous
because Correct your spelling
dangerous
one
day we won’t be able to get to
home.
In conclusion, our house is Change preposition
apply
relly
nice and we would like Correct your spelling
really
continue
Fix the infinitive
to continue
live
here. Change the form of the verb
living
However
, your
raised our rent Correct pronoun usage
you
last
quarter and we think it is very expensive. I have a good friend and we would like to share one
bed with his
.
We would be grateful if you could get Correct pronoun usage
him
problems
fixed as soon as possible.
I look forward to hearing from you very soon.
Correct article usage
the problems
Your
sincerely,
Nadezhda EliseevaCorrect the word
Yours
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task achievement
Be sure to revise and correct grammatical errors to enhance clarity.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph discusses a single main idea to improve readability.
task achievement
You have included all the required elements: explanation of the situation, description of the problems, and a request for solutions.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriately formal for a letter to an estate agency.
Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.