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Write a letter to your landlord complaining about noise in the block of flats which he owns. You should include -where you live -explain the problem -what he should do

#landlord #noise #block #flats #-where #-explain #-what
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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
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 email finds you well. I am writing
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 message in order to complain about the
noise
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 sounds near to my
apartment
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. I live in 104 building, second floor, door number 5, which is located near to the supermarket. The
apartment
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 is a great place to live.
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, I feel uncomfortable because of the
noise
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 issue . The problem is that there is a huge
noise
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 that comes from
apartment
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 number 6, which is very close to mine. And it becomes very loud in the evening at 11 pm, which is the time that I go
for
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 rest and sleep. Even though I contacted
with
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the
apartment
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 owner
last
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 week about
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 issue, he
doest
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 not seem to understand, and he keeps ignoring me. I suggest that you contact him, and if he keeps making the same
noise
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, I prefer that you move him out of the building. If you need any
further
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 details, you can contact me by email. Kind regards, Nouf Mut,
Submitted by noufxmut on

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task achievement
You should provide more detailed information about the specific nature of the noise and its impact on your daily life.
coherence cohesion
Ensure all sentences flow consistently by avoiding repetitive statements and improving transitions between paragraphs.
greeting and closing
Clear and concise opening and closing statements in your letter.
single idea per paragraph
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making it easy to follow.
suitable writing tone
The tone is polite and professional, which is suitable for this kind of formal complaint.
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