Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In your letter explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Sumit,
I hope
this
letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I am writing this
letter to share my excitement about my new home.
After a long search, finally
I moved into a new house last
week which is located near Main Street, 4589 Sharon Avenue is my home address. It has two bedrooms with attached balconies, an open kitchen, and three pieces of washroom. Also
, there is a small garden where I have planted some vegetables and flowers. In my spare time, I love to do gardening. Also
, all amenities are within walking distance like grocery stores and convenience shops.
Visit my place next weekend so, we will enjoy ourselves together with
Rohan who is coming too. As well as
We will have dinner in Rajdhani restaurant, which serves a variety of food.
Hope to see you soon.
Yours lovingly,
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task achievement
Consider revising the phrase 'radiant health and best of the spirits' to a more natural expression like 'great health and good spirits.'
coherence cohesion
Use consistent and varied sentence structures to maintain a smooth flow.
task achievement
The letter contains a warm and friendly tone, fitting for a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, making the letter easy to follow.
coherence cohesion
Appropriate greetings and closings are used, adding to the authenticity of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite