The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the changes in production (millions)of three products in a garment factory from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The line chart below illustrates the quantities of three kinds of products in a garment factory between the years 1990 and 2010. It's clear that except for
suit
, the others all witnessed a generally increasing trend. In 1990, around 15
millions
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million
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of
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suits were produced in that factory, followed by
dress
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dresses
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and
coat
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coats
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with
the
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figures for about 10
millions
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million
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and 7.5
millions
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million
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respectively. After that, the number of
suit
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suits
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saw a significant upward and peaked at approximately 22.5
million
in 1995, which is almost double the quantities of
dress
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dresses
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and
coat
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coats
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and both of them reached about 12.5
million
in that year. After 1995,
coat
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coats
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rase
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rose
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quickly and
had overtaken
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suit
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suits
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to be the highest with around 18
million
in 2000,
whereas
merely over 10
million
of
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dresses were made in that year. During the remaining period, both
coat
and dress experienced a normal increase and
finally
reached 25
million
for the highest and 15
million
for the lowest respectively,
while
only
suit
witnessed a
flactuation
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fluctuation
and went to under 20
million
in 2010.
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