The diagram below shows the process of making olive oil.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing production from olive oil.
In general,
this
is a largely mechanical process including 8 steps, from the harvest of Linking Words
olives
to the factory stages.
Having looked at the given picture for more details, Use synonyms
first,
farmers will collect the Linking Words
olives
from trees. Use synonyms
Then
they are delivered to the plants and stored in a huge vat for 2 to 3 days. After that, the Linking Words
olives
are washed with cool water and transported to the harmer where they are crushed into olive stones in a container. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the olive paste is transported to filters and Linking Words
then
it is pressured and filtered by the hydraulic press.
The process continues with the Linking Words
olives
being passed through the pipe to the centrifuge where they are spun and separated from the water and the remaining oil is filled into the bottles. Use synonyms
Then
these bottles will be delivered to stores.Linking Words
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