The diagram below shows the process of making olive oil.

The diagram below shows the process of making olive oil.
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The diagram illustrates the process of producing production from olive oil. In general,
this
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is a largely mechanical process including 8 steps, from the harvest of
olives
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to the factory stages. Having looked at the given picture for more details,
first,
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farmers will collect the
olives
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from trees.
Then
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they are delivered to the plants and stored in a huge vat for 2 to 3 days. After that, the
olives
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are washed with cool water and transported to the harmer where they are crushed into olive stones in a container.
By contrast
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, the olive paste is transported to filters and
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it is pressured and filtered by the hydraulic press. The process continues with the
olives
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being passed through the pipe to the centrifuge where they are spun and separated from the water and the remaining oil is filled into the bottles.
Then
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these bottles will be delivered to stores.
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