The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.

The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and

2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The graph illustrates the top five most popular
celebrities
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profiles on
Instagram
in 2018 and 2021.
Overall
, all of the above influencers had almost 100
millions
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views on
Instagram
in 2018.
Then
, they had reached at least 250
millions
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followers
at the end
.
In addition
to
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it
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, Cristiano
Ronaldo
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Ronaldo's
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account
got
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more than 300
millions
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followers and he
had
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the biggest numbers among
Instagram
influencers.
Firstly
, in 2018 celebrities
such
as Selena Gomez, Ariana Grande and Cristiano Ronaldo had nearly the same number of
Instagram
users and they got more than 100
millions
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views.
However
, Kylie Jenner and The Rock profiles had only nearly 90
millions
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of
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followers at that time.
Secondly
, in 2021 the situation had changed dramatically. All of these mentioned influencers hit
the
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250
millions
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at least and especially Cristiano
Ronaldo
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Ronaldo's
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profile reached the highest number .
Moreover
, his
Instagram
account achieved approximately 320
millions
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people's views in 2021.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words instagram, millions with synonyms.
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