The bar chart below shows the popularity of well-known Instagram accounts in 2018 and 2021. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevent.
The graph illustrates the top five most popular
celebrities
profiles on Change the noun form
celebrity
Instagram
in 2018 and 2021.
Overall
, all of the above influencers had almost 100 millions
views on Change to singular
million
Instagram
in 2018. Then
, they had reached at least 250 millions
followers Change to singular
million
at the end
. In addition
to
Change preposition
apply
it
, Cristiano Correct pronoun usage
apply
Ronaldo
account Change noun form
Ronaldo's
got
more than 300 Verb problem
has
millions
followers and he Change to singular
million
had
the biggest numbers among Wrong verb form
has
Instagram
influencers.
Firstly
, in 2018 celebrities such
as Selena Gomez, Ariana Grande and Cristiano Ronaldo had nearly the same number of Instagram
users and they got more than 100 millions
views. Change to singular
million
However
, Kylie Jenner and The Rock profiles had only nearly 90 millions
Fix the agreement mistake
million
of
followers at that time.
Change preposition
apply
Secondly
, in 2021 the situation had changed dramatically. All of these mentioned influencers hit the
250 Correct article usage
apply
millions
at least and especially Cristiano Change to singular
million
Ronaldo
profile reached the highest number .Change noun form
Ronaldo's
Moreover
, his Instagram
account achieved approximately 320 millions
people's views in 2021.Change to singular
million
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