You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter ● inform them of your situation ● explain how this is affecting you ● request a new card

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to you about my Identification
card
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.My name is Sabohat and I am studying at your
school
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.I am an associate student.
Last
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week,I lost my Identification
card
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.I think I lost it in the
school
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's library.Because
Last
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week Monday I have been there with my friends to take books.
Then
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I dropped my purse.After a day,I received it from a librarian.But I had not got my Identification
card
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.I asked the librarian but she said I do not know your
card
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. I am so concerned about
this
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problem.Librarian did not know.Me too.As you know, I cannot enter the
school
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without my
card
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.During a week,I could not go to the
school
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.
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, my teachers reprimanded me.So I have to go to
school
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. I am requesting from you,Can you give me a new
card
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?I would be very grateful if you create it for me.I should take it.I think you understand me. I look forward to hearing from you soon.Please do not hesitate to reply to me Yours faithfully, Sabohat
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Logical Structure
Provide a clear logical structure to your letter with an appropriate introduction, body paragraphs and conclusion. Use linking words effectively to connect your ideas.
Greeting and Closing
Use adequate greeting and closing phrases that suit the formality of the situation. A more formal greeting (e.g., 'Dear Director of Student Services') and closing (e.g., 'Yours sincerely') is expected.
Single Idea Per Paragraph
Ensure each paragraph contains a single idea for clarity and focus, and sufficiently elaborate on it to support your situation.
Complete Response
Fully develop your ideas by providing more details and specific examples of how the situation affects you, such as specific events or opportunities you have missed due to not having the identification card.
Suitable Writing Tone
Adopt a consistently formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid informal language and ensure the language usage is appropriate for writing to a director.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Identification card
  • Student ID
  • Lost
  • Misplaced
  • Access
  • Campus facilities
  • Library access
  • Gym membership
  • Discounts
  • Pass verification
  • Student status
  • Urgent
  • Issuance
  • Replacement
  • Procedure
  • Fee
  • Documentation
  • Assistance
  • Resolution
  • Prompt
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