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The graph below shows average world GDP in six regions of the world during the first decade of the 21st century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows average world GDP in six regions of the world during the first decade of the 21st century. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the average world
GDP
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 in six different regions of the world during the first decade of the 21st century. The unit of measurement is percentage.
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, America had the highest
GDP
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 among all other regions, followed by Europe and
Western
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the Western
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pacific
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Pacific
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,
while
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Western
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the Western
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 Pacific had the third largest
GDP
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,
on the other
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hand
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 the
GDP
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 of South East Asia was the lowest. The GP of Africa and East Mediterranean was almost equal. The
GDP
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 of America was around 14%, the only region to have the highest percentage, followed by Europe, with a
GDP
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 percentage of approximately 9%, being the second highest in all the regions. Two
continets
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continents
 that are, Africa and South East Asia had almost same
GDP
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 of around 5.5% and 5%, respectively.
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, the Western Pacific had the third largest
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 of around 7.5%. Only one continent i.e., South East Asia had the smallest
GDP
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 of 4%.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 82%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gdp with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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