The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summeries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summeries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The first line graph
illustrated
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illustrates
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the
percentage
differences
of
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between
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households
with three types of electrical appliances between 1920 and 2019. The following line graph
portrayed
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how many hours per household
dedicated
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were dedicated
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to
housework
per week in the same country and
time
period
.
Overall
, these two statistics had developed a negative trend
whereas
the
percentage
ownership of electrical products increased, and
average
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an average
the average
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number of hours spent on
housework
had declined over these years.
Additionally
, the
percentage
ownership of the three electrical appliances had all
went
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gone
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up, with the
refrigerator
had
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having
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experienced the most significant rise.
Firstly
, it can be seen that washing machines had the greatest
percentage
of ownership figured 40%, meanwhile, a neglectable
percentage
of
households
had access to a
refrigerator
.
However
, the usage of washing machines had increased by a mere 35% over the given
time
period
.
On the other hand
, the proportion of
households
owning a
refrigerator
had drastically climbed up to 100% until 1960 and
level
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levelled
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off since
then
. Eventually, 100% of
households
owned a vacuum cleaner and a
refrigerator
in 2019.
Furthermore
, the citizens in
this
particular country
had
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spent less
time
on
housework
per week over
this
time
period
due to
the usage of electrical appliances had greatly improved. From 1920 to 1960, there
were
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was
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a dramatic
downfall
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fall
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on
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in
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the average
time
spent on
housework
with an average of 10% less annually within these 40 years.
Afterthat
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After that
, it ha started to reduce slowly over the
time
period
of 1960 and 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, households, housework, time, period, refrigerator with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Ownership
  • Electrical appliances
  • Households
  • Decrease
  • Increase
  • Correlation
  • Period
  • Adoption
  • Universal
  • Minimal
  • Significant
  • Early years
  • Mid-century
  • Modern era
  • Data trends
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