The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010.

The bar charts illustrate the number of citizens who owned computers from 2002 to 2010

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come with their education in 2002 and in 2010. In general, the proportion of

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owners increased steadily throughout the period shown.

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, the higher education users had

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percentage of

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users. It is clearly seen that no high school diploma people had the lowest ratio of

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ownership, at approximately 15% in 2002. In 2010, individuals who didn’t graduate high school and graduated high school used

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were high as double as the ones in 2002, at about 15% and 35% compared with 40% and 70% respectively. Postgraduate people who owned computers had the highest percentage, about 75% in 2002 and almost 100% in 2010.

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, in 2010 the others

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who had

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education,

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as college, Bachelor’s and postgraduation

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just had a higher proportion by 20% compared with

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2002.