Write a letter to a friend who just moved into a new house that you are sending a gift to. Include: 1) What the gift is 2) Why you chose it 3) How it will be delivered. Write at least 150 words .

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Dear Jane, Hope you're doing well. I'm happy to hear that you've just moved to a new house.

New

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A new

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apartment

for living

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to live

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in is

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always beautiful. My relatives have already bought a new flat too. They

have

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had

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a little baby and decided to find something more spacious. On

this

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occasion

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occasion,

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I bought a modest gift for you.

This

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is a bed linen for your bedroom. I've chosen

such

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present

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a present

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because it's always necessary at home and

pleased

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pleases

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for

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apply

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every owner. You can use it whenever you want and it'll never be useless. If I could visit you, I would take your gift but I work full time and my vacation won't be soon.

However

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, my sister, Emma, lives in the same place and she can deliver it to you. I’d

really

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be really

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grateful if you could write

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to me

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the

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about the

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best time when you are free and ready to get the present from Emma. Write soon. Best wishes, Julia

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coherence cohesion

Consider using more transitional words or phrases to improve the flow between sentences and paragraphs.

task achievement

Ensure all sentences contribute explicitly to the main requirements of the task without unnecessary information.

task achievement

The letter includes all required components: the gift (bed linen), why it was chosen, and how it will be delivered.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for writing to a friend.

coherence cohesion

The letter uses appropriate greetings and a closing paragraph.

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

156 words

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers ahould be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe thay should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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