The graph below shows the number of tourists visting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where revelant.
The given line graph illustrates the
number
of tourists
visiting a specific Caribbean island
over the period
from 2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the graph demonstrates a significant upward trend in the number
of tourists
, with the total number
of visitors increasing steadily throughout the period
. A notable feature is the gradual rise
in both the number
of tourists
staying on the island
and those opting for cruise
ship
accommodations.In detail, the total number
of tourists
visiting the island
increased from 1 million
in 2010 to 3.5 million
in 2017. This
growth was driven by substantial increases in both categories of tourists
. Those staying on the island
began at 0.75 million
in 2010 and saw a consistent rise
, reaching 1.5 million
by 2013.
However
, from 2013 onwards, the number
plateaued, remaining stable until 2015, before climbing again to reach 1.5 million
by the end of the period
.On the other hand
, tourists
choosing to stay on cruise
ships exhibited more dramatic growth. Starting at just 0.25 million
in 2010, their numbers grew rapidly, surpassing 1.5 million
by 2015. From this
point, the number
continued to rise
sharply, peaking at 2 million
in 2017, thus
becoming the dominant group by the end of the period
.
In comparison, while
both categories of tourists
showed an overall
increase, cruise
ship
visitors experienced a more pronounced and consistent rise
compared to those staying on the island
, particularly after 2013. This
shift indicates a growing preference for cruise
ship
accommodation over time.In conclusion, the Caribbean island
witnessed a steady increase in tourist numbers from 2010 to 2017, with a noticeable shift towards cruise
ship
stays, particularly in the latter years of the period
.Submitted by Yasar Khan on
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