The map shows the changes of Stockford city in 1986 and now. Summarize all the information in the picture and give comparison
The two maps illustrate Stockford
city
before its redevelopment in 1986 and a map showing the present of the city
.
The North East area
of the town used to have farmland
, a primary school, and a bridge. Nowadays, the farmland
was
demolished. A part of the demolished Wrong verb form
has been
farmland
was redeveloped into a housing area
and the rest remained untouched. The primary school was expanded and renovated to a much bigger school. The bridge that has existed since 1986 still exists in the present date
.
The North West Correct your spelling
day
area
used to have a number of shops and a post office, but now only the post office lasts, the remaining shops were demolished and converted into housing.
The
South East Change preposition
In the
area
of the town, there used to be gardens, a large house, and a single large tree. Now, both the gardens and the house were redeveloped into a retirement home, and the big tree was cut down and the space was repurposed into a housing area
.
The South West area
of Stockford city
used to have farmland
and a river stoke. In the present day, only the river stroke lasted, whilst the farmland
was deconstructed and made into a hosuing
Correct your spelling
housing
area
. Aside from that, some areas along the river stoke were developed into a housing area
.
In conclusion, most of city’s
old buildings were either destroyed and repurposed or expanded and renovated. Aside from that, we could see from the Add an article
the city’s
present day
map by the amount of Add a hyphen
present-day
housings
that the population of Stockford Fix the agreement mistake
housing
City
has risen to quite the number in comparison to the past.Submitted by riani.the2 on
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