The given table provides vital data about the amount of fast food consumed in Melbourne from 2005 to the present time and predictions for the near future.
The presented table compares data about the amount of fast food that people ate, eat and will use at 3 points in time namely, 2005, today, and 2025 in Melbourne.
Overall
, it is important that the number of all
meals other than Hamburgers increases; Correct determiner usage
apply
moreover
, in the prediction, the figure for all items will climb.
According to
the graph, at the start, Hamburgers, the main food in Melbourne, the Australian city, in 2005, hit 40; then
it has reduced to 38 in the present; however
; it will go up to 51 in 2025. The second most popular dish was fried chicken by 35; thereafter
, its trend grew and in 2025 it will reach 45. Nowadays, Salad, was the less common meal in 2005 owing to the fact that it touched 5, a record 15; additionally
, it will report 41 in 2025.
The diagram demonstrates that in the beginning, not only Fried rice but also
Noodles scored 6 after that, Fried rice jumped to 9 in the present, and its number will stabilize until 2025; nevertheless
, another element hits 8 today and it will exactly equal to the Fried rice's figure in 2025.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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