The chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in.five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The bar charts illustrate the data of house
pricing
in five different cities during time in two periods between 1990 and 1995 , in 1996-2002.
Fix the agreement mistake
prices
It is clear that
the majority of proportion
of house pricing was an upward trend. Add an article
the proportion
a proportion
while
the figure for house prices in Frankfuart
city was a downward trend.
During the first Correct your spelling
Frankfurt
period
the percentage of Add a comma
period,
habitates
in New York, Correct your spelling
habitats
habitat
Tyoko
, and London was Correct your spelling
Tokyo
a
lowest than Correct article usage
apply
Madrid
and Change preposition
in Madrid
Frankfuart
. the figure for Correct your spelling
Frankfurt
houses
prices in New York to around -5. Tyoko and London experienced the same Change the noun form
house
levles
at -8. Correct your spelling
levels
In
contrast
the proportion of Add a comma
contrast,
habitates
pricing in Madrid and Correct your spelling
habitats
habitat
Frankfuart
was Correct your spelling
Frankfurt
to
around 2 and 3 per cent respectively.
From 1996 to 2002, the amount of Change preposition
apply
houses
pricing in London significant
increased Change the word
significantly
over
10% Change preposition
by over
while
,
New York Remove the comma
apply
growth
to 5%. The figure for Replace the word
grew
houses
pricing in Madrid and Tyoko slightly increased to 4% and -5% respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
house
In contrast
, the amount of houses
pricing in Frankfuart
Correct your spelling
Frankfurt
shown
a downward trend to around -1% Wrong verb form
showed
at the end
of the period.Submitted by jeebjib14 on
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