The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the
number
of Use synonyms
people
who participated in various sports like Use synonyms
tennis
, Use synonyms
basketball
, Use synonyms
cricket
, golf, swimming, football, and rugby in an area, in 1997 and 2017. The Use synonyms
number
of adults Use synonyms
are
depicted in thousands.
Change the verb form
is
Overall
, Linking Words
tennis
was the most popular sport during both years, Use synonyms
while
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basketball
was the least popular sport in 1997, Use synonyms
however
, it became quite famous in the next two decades, and the spot for the least popular sport was replaced by Linking Words
cricket
.
In 1997, 50,000 Use synonyms
people
played Use synonyms
tennis
, which was the highest Use synonyms
amongst
all sports, followed by nearly 35,000 individuals who preferred swimming. Rugby was the third most popular with about 32,000 Change preposition
among
people
, closely followed by 31,000 Use synonyms
people
who preferred golf and football respectively. Use synonyms
Cricket
was enjoyed by approximately 25,000 Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
Lastly
, Linking Words
basketball
was the preference of only 9,000 adults.
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Although
the preferences of Linking Words
people
changed quite a lot in 20 years, the popularity of Use synonyms
basketball
stayed undefeated, with 54,000 Use synonyms
people
participating in Use synonyms
tennis
. The Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
who played football and rugby substantially increased to approximately 39,000. Statistics of Use synonyms
people
who enjoyed swimming stayed constant over the years. There was a rise in the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
people
who played Use synonyms
basketball
, to 22,000 Use synonyms
people
in 2017. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the Linking Words
adults
participating in Correct quantifier usage
number of adults
cricket
significantly decreased to 7,000.
In conclusion, Use synonyms
while
all the sports had an increase in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
people
participating from 1997 to 2017, Use synonyms
cricket
was the only one with a significant plunge in statistics.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, people, tennis, basketball, cricket with synonyms.
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