Although you are meant to present your thesis project in one month, your sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. You would like to change dates for your presentation. Write a letter to your professor. In your letter: · Explain the situation · Remind the professor of your academic achievements to date · Ask for a different date to present your thesis

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Dear Mr Jackson Unfortunately, I have to let you know I will not be able to present my thesis project in one month. I am very sorry about

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situation but my lovely sister is getting married in Spain at the same time. I regret that I don't inform you earlier but the wedding plans have changed too. As you know I have a presentation about bugs' nightlife, it is a very interesting innovative topic with a fresh point of view about these interesting creatures. I believe our research allows me to get to Oxford University so the presentation is crucial for me. I realize that I am asking for a big favour but can we establish a different date for presenting my thesis? The wedding is on the 5th of May so every date after the ceremony is convenient for me. I know it is a difficult situation but

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wedding is very important for me and my family. I am sure you will understand my position. Sorry again about

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situation and hope you will give me the answer as soon as possible Sincerely

Submitted by dariusz.slusar on Mon May 27 2024

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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