You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The graphs provide proportions of electronic
devices
owners, specifically for washing Change the noun form
device
machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
machines
refrigerator
, and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
, Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
along with
weekly hours of chores in a household from 1920 to 2019, with a 20-year gap between each year.
Overall
, the number of all appliances increase
over the year Correct subject-verb agreement
increases
while
the chores' time significantly reaches opposite
Correct article usage
the opposite
to
Change preposition
apply
that
. We can conclude that the higher the amount of home Correct pronoun usage
apply
appliances
users in a household, the less time it takes to finish Fix the agreement mistake
appliance
a
housework, especially related to cleaning jobs and washing clothes.
If we focus more on Remove the article
apply
the
home devices, refrigerator users have a dramatic upward tendency, reaching almost a hundred Correct article usage
apply
percent
increase over the others. Change the spelling
per cent
Similarly
, washing machines and vacuum cleaners, which have been
slightly more popular than Wrong verb form
were
refrigerator
at the start, Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
also
running
to the same end but the former ended up shorter than the latter by 35%.
Wrong verb form
ran
On the other hand
, the hours of chores in a household noticably
get lower as the year goesCorrect your spelling
noticeably
, with
a difference of 40 hours between 1920 and 2019.Rephrase
by, with
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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