the line chart show the prison population in a european country from 1911 to 2001

the line chart show the prison population in a european country from 1911 to 2001
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The two-line graph compares the
number
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of
prisoners
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in a European area over 90
years
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from 1911.
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it is clear that
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there was a contrasting trend in the prison population
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Whilst the highest
number
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of
prisoners
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was recorded from males, the opposite can be seen in females showing a consistent decrease in given
years
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. In 1911, under 20,000 male
prisoners
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were shown, six times higher than 3,200 female ones.
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figure remained ten
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later before decreasing in 1931, hitting a low at 10,000
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. Before recovering 20,000, the figure experienced
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consistent stability until 1971, after which it rose dramatically to 40,000 in 1981. And
then
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, the
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sharply grew before
finally
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peaking at 45,000 in 2001.
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, the
number
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of female
prisoners
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witnessed a dramatic decline in the
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30-year
years
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years
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period from 1911, and
then
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it reached a trough at 6,000 in 1941.
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figure later increased gradually in the next
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till 1961, before returning under 1,000
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in 1971.
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this
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, it experienced steady growth in the prison population and stood at 1,800 people in 2001.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, prisoners, years with synonyms.
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