You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time. Write a letter to the editor. In your letter: •Say which edition and when did the article appear •Explain why you lost contact with your friend •Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch Write at least 150 words

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Dear

Ser

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Sir

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/Madame, I am writing

this

letter to you because I have seen some information about my friend in your newspaper. Recently I read an article about a car exhibition in our city. It was in edition number 82 on June 10th, and you interviewed Alex Freedom. We were best friends since childhood, but when I was ten years old, I moved to another city and we lost contact with him. In the past, we did not have phones, so I do not have his number to

this

day.

Therefore

, I would like to ask you to contact him and inform him that his friend Vlad looking for him for a long time. He can contact me by current email address,

also

by 89994568749 number and messengers. I will be very grateful to you for

this

help. I hope for your feedback as soon as possible. Best regards, Vladimir Belitskii

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Minor grammatical and spelling mistakes such as 'Ser/Madame' instead of 'Sir/Madam'.

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task achievement

The letter covers all the necessary points of the task effectively.

coherence and cohesion

The greeting and closing are appropriately used for a formal letter.

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

150 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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