Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition totheir main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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what subjects university students ought to focus

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sparked considerable controversy.

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some argue that concentrating on solely their own major is most conducive to becoming sophisticated, I,

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others, contend that considering other subjects as well is more constructive for

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holistic development.

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with, some may claim that dedicating one's time and efforts to only the major they are studying at the university provides them with more growth opportunities. They believe

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is mainly because they'd have more time to comprehend the theories and work on practical areas.

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, they'd develop a greater expertise in their field, prior to finding better job prospects in the future.

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, the great job vacancies ensure their financial stability and a high quality of life. To illustrate, renowned Iranian engineers declared that they had allocated all of their time to focus on engineering during their university days.

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, despite some accuracies to

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perspective, it often comes at the cost of being deprived of the

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being offered in other fields;

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, it is better to strike a balance between studying different fields,

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a well-rounded development. One major merit of taking other topics into account alongside theirs is the general understanding of the world. By considering different points of view, theories, and approaches, individuals cultivate a better comprehension of the events and

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, improve decision-making skills

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as critical thinking.

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, since each major has been developed from distinct cultures and has a novel background history, individuals would foster not only the

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of a wide range of cultural heritages but

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a sympathetic approach towards different societies. Take the USA as an example; where psychology students are taking history courses as well, and

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participation has benefited them in having a better comprehension of human personality development throughout history,

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the reasons behind it.

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, they've improved their

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regarding their own major whilst considering distinct perspectives and contributors, highlighting the positive impact of

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approach. In conclusion,

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many advocate for focusing on a single subject, I firmly believe it is best for students to seek extracurricular topics as well. In fact, doing so

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imparts significant advantages to them as it helps them enhance their general

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of the world,

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better cognitive skills. Ultimately, a balance between all these subjects comes to the student's benefit.