The chart below shows the price in euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the price in euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph gives information about the cost in euros of 800 grams of four different
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of bread in a specific European country between 2001 and 2006.
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, it is evident that the
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the mountains remained stable throughout the period,
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the lakes showed some fluctuation.
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,the cost
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increased dramatically
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of the period. at first glance, it is obvious that the most popular destination for tourists from 1987 to 2002 was the lakes.
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, in 1997 the percentage of visitors to the lakes grew suddenly from exactly 40 to around 75
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.Before receding back to 50
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.
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, in 1987 the mountains visitors climbed from 20
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to nearly 30
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in 1992. and
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unchanged
to the end of the period. The number of
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visitors saw a slight drop from 40
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in 1987 to around 35
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in 1992.
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The
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tourists reached a peak of around 75
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in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, thousand with synonyms.
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