The chart below shows the price in euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart below shows the price in euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph gives information about the cost in euros of 800 grams of four different
kind
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of bread in a specific European country between 2001 and 2006.
Overall
, it is evident that the
figure
of
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the mountains remained stable throughout the period,
Whereas
the
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of
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the lakes showed some fluctuation.
However
,the cost
figure
increased dramatically
at the end
of the period. at first glance, it is obvious that the most popular destination for tourists from 1987 to 2002 was the lakes.
Furthermore
, in 1997 the percentage of visitors to the lakes grew suddenly from exactly 40 to around 75
thousand
.Before receding back to 50
thousand
.
In contrast
, in 1987 the mountains visitors climbed from 20
thousand
to nearly 30
thousand
in 1992. and
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unchanged
to the end of the period. The number of
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visitors saw a slight drop from 40
thousand
in 1987 to around 35
thousand
in 1992.
As well as
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The
figure
for
the
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costal
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tourists reached a peak of around 75
thousand
person
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in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words figure, thousand with synonyms.
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