The chart below shows the price in euros of 800 grams of four types of bread in one European country from 2001 to 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph gives information about the cost in euros of 800 grams of four different
kind
of bread in a specific European country between 2001 and 2006.
Change to a plural noun
kinds
Overall
, it is evident that the figure
of
the mountains remained stable throughout the period, Change preposition
for
Whereas
the figure
of
the lakes showed some fluctuation. Change preposition
for
However
,the cost figure
increased dramatically at the end
of the period.
at first glance, it is obvious that the most popular destination for tourists from 1987 to 2002 was the lakes.Furthermore
, in 1997 the percentage of visitors to the lakes grew suddenly from exactly 40 to around 75 thousand
.Before receding back to 50 thousand
.In contrast
, in 1987 the mountains visitors climbed from 20 thousand
to nearly 30 thousand
in 1992. and unchaned
to the end of the period.
The number of Correct your spelling
unchanged
costal
visitors saw a slight drop from 40 Correct your spelling
coastal
thousand
in 1987 to around 35 thousand
in 1992. As well as
,
The Remove the comma
apply
figure
for the
Correct article usage
apply
costal
tourists reached a peak of around 75 Correct your spelling
coastal
thousand
person
in 2007.Change to a plural noun
people
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