The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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In the chart, it is shown the salaries of 4 different occupations,
such
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as police, nurse, firefighter, and underground driver in the United Kingdom. The figure
also
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shows the differences between the beginner's
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and the person who has 3
years
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experiences
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experience
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.
Additionally
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, it can be seen that the average working
hours
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per
week
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for those jobs
in
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the table. Except for the underground driver, people gain more money as long as they work.
For example
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, a new nurse gains 1800
pounds
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with
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by
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working 38
hours
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per
week
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while
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a new firefighter makes 40000
pounds
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with
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by
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working 55
hours
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per
week
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.
On the other hand
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, an underground driver's beginner
salary
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is the highest even if he/she has the least amount of working
hours
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. They make 50000
pounds
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with
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while
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driving for 36
hours
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per
week
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.
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, for all the professions, it can be said that the
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increases when the individual has more experience in the field. For nurses, firefighters, and underground drivers, the salaries increase
1000
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by 1000
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pounds
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after 3 years.
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that, the police have the most rise of
the
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apply
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salary
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with 2000
pounds
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salary, hours, week, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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