The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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In the chart, it is shown the salaries of 4 different occupations,
such
as police, nurse, firefighter, and underground driver in the United Kingdom. The figure also
shows the differences between the beginner's salary
and the person who has 3 years
Change noun form
years'
experiences
. Fix the agreement mistake
experience
Additionally
, it can be seen that the average working hours
per week
for those jobs in
the table.
Except for the underground driver, people gain more money as long as they work. Add a missing verb
are in
For example
, a new nurse gains 1800 pounds
with
working 38 Change preposition
by
hours
per week
while
a new firefighter makes 40000 pounds
with
working 55 Change preposition
by
hours
per week
. On the other hand
, an underground driver's beginner salary
is the highest even if he/she has the least amount of working hours
. They make 50000 pounds
with
driving for 36 Change preposition
while
hours
per week
.
Moreover
, for all the professions, it can be said that the salary
increases when the individual has more experience in the field. For nurses, firefighters, and underground drivers, the salaries increase 1000
Change preposition
by 1000
pounds
after 3 years. Besides
that, the police have the most rise of the
Correct article usage
apply
salary
with 2000 pounds
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Vocabulary: Replace the words salary, hours, week, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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