The pie charts below show the types of media used from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
There are two pie charts above that show the comparison of the different types of music media used by people in 1990 and 2000. The only common device is a compact
disk
for 2 different eras.
In the first figure, it can be said that there were 3 different types of media, such
as cassette, compact disk
, and vinyl records in 1990. The most popular item was a compact disk
with a percentage of 55. A quarter of the population preferred a cassette, while
the
one of a fifth chose a vinyl record.
Correct article usage
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On the other hand
, it can be seen the extinction of the cassettes and the vinyl records in 2000. With the new technological developments, there were only two different types of music media used in 2000 such
as compact disk
and digital audio. Digital audio had the highest ratio of the
people with 95%, Correct article usage
apply
while
the compact disk
followed with only 5% in 2000.Submitted by bloodylady on
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