The pie charts below show the types of media used from 1990 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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There are two pie charts above that show the comparison of the different types of music media used by people in 1990 and 2000. The only common device is a compact

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for 2 different eras. In the first figure, it can be said that there were 3 different types of media,

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as cassette, compact

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, and vinyl records in 1990. The most popular item was a compact

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with a percentage of 55. A quarter of the population preferred a cassette,

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one of a fifth chose a vinyl record.

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, it can be seen the extinction of the cassettes and the vinyl records in 2000. With the new technological developments, there were only two different types of music media used in 2000

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as compact

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and digital audio. Digital audio had the highest ratio of

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people with 95%,

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the compact

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followed with only 5% in 2000.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

157 words

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