The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
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The presented diagrams compare data about dance classes not only in locations but
also
species that are attended by young generations in a small Australia's
city.
Change noun form
Australia
Overall
, it is important that most of students
who perform dance have privet studies; Add an article
the students
moreover
, most of them are less than 11 years old and Ballet is the best one.
According to
the pie chart, Nearly half of the youth selections are Privet studies for learning dancing; then
School halls, the second place, is 24%. Thirdly
, Community Hall and Other has
5% less than the prior. Change the verb form
have
Finally
, 10% of them choose college-based studies.
The bar graph demonstrates most of the young people who select Ballet, the popular item, are children who are under 11 years at 600; furthermore
, inhabitants who are between 11 and 16 are 300. Thereafter
, Tap has a trend like the previous by 450 for kids and 50 people less than the last
one for 11 to 16 while
Modern is the most common among teenagers owing to the fact that is
520 and the number which is the same as a ballet for the older group for children.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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