The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.

The charts below give information on the location and types of dance classes young people in a town in Australia are currently attending.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Your report should comprise a minimum of 150 words.
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The presented diagrams compare data about dance classes not only in locations but
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species that are attended by young generations in a small
Australia's
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city.
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, it is important that most of
students
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who perform dance have privet studies;
moreover
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, most of them are less than 11 years old and Ballet is the best one.
According to
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the pie chart, Nearly half of the youth selections are Privet studies for learning dancing;
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School halls, the second place, is 24%.
Thirdly
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, Community Hall and Other
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5% less than the prior.
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, 10% of them choose college-based studies. The bar graph demonstrates most of the young people who select Ballet, the popular item, are children who are under 11 years at 600;
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, inhabitants who are between 11 and 16 are 300.
Thereafter
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, Tap has a trend like the previous by 450 for kids and 50 people less than the
last
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one for 11 to 16
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Modern is the most common among teenagers owing to the fact
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520 and the number which is the same as a ballet for the older group for children.
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