The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The given two pie charts were broken down into six categories and
presents
the percentages of how Correct subject-verb agreement
present
many
Correct quantifier usage
much
energy
was consumed, and the number of greenhouse
gas
emissions
, both for Australian households.
As can be seen from the pie chart that
heating and water heating occupied the majority of Correct word choice
apply
energy
consumption and greenhouse
gas
emissions
. However
, they produced only half of the energy
consumption. The second biggest greenhouse
emission contributor were
other appliances.
It is obvious that heating used 42% of Correct subject-verb agreement
was
energy
while
it only emitted 15% of greenhouse
gas
emissions
. On the contrary
, other appliances consumed no more than a fifth of energy
, but it
produced almost 30% of Correct pronoun usage
they
greenhouse
gas
emissions
. Similarly
, refrigerators and lighting used only 7% and 4 % of energy
, nonetheless
, their emissions
was
doubled by 14% and 8%, respectively.
Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, it is interesting to note that the numbers for water heating and cooling in both categories were nearly equal, and their discrepancy was just 1% to 2%.Submitted by wendy190427 on
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