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The bar chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

The bar chart illustrates the
sales
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 of four different categories of digital
games
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 worldwide, including mobile phone
games
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, online
games
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, console
games
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 and handheld
games
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, over a six-year period.
Overall
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, handheld
games
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 were the most significant growth globally during
this
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 period.
In addition
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, console
games
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 were the second-highest in
sales
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 in 2000 but became the least popular after six years.
Conversely
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, online
games
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, which had no
sales
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 in 2000, became the second-highest in
sales
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 by 2006. In 2000, there were only two categories of digital
games
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 with
sales
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: handheld and console
games
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. Handheld
games
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 gained the most
sales
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 globally, with nearly $12
billion
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,
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console
games
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 had global
sales
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 of approximately $6
billion
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.
Sales
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 of handheld
games
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 increased steadily each year, rising by around $6 to peak at approximately $18
billion
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 by the end of six years.
In contrast
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,
sales
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 of console
games
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 decreased gradually from $6
billion
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 to approximately $3
billion
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 during the same period. Meanwhile,
sales
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 of online
games
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 and mobile phone
games
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 surged from no
sales
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 in 2000 to around $10
billion
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 and $7
billion
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, respectively, by 2006.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, games, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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