The maps below show the centre of a small towm called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate the middle of a little city called Islip showing the present model and future development.
Overall
, it is clear from the maps that the road
will circle the town and the place of shops
will be divided into parts into many facilities like a car park, bus station and shopping centre.
Now, in this
small city, there is only one stright
Correct your spelling
straight
road
in the middle of the map and two turnings to the school and park in the south-west and south-east of the map, respectively. Moreover
, 16 shops
are located along the long road
at the center
. Change the spelling
centre
Additionally
, housing is also
placed in the center
, just under the Change the spelling
centre
shops
and the countryside is in the north.
Islip town centre now looks more public and there was improvement at the center
. The north Change the spelling
centre
shops
will be devided
into 3 parts, but the south Correct your spelling
divided
shops
stay. Also
, they will make road
more available in the city by building roads around the town and they will build dual carriages in the west and new housing in the east.Fix the agreement mistake
roads
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