The line graph shows the per thousand vehicles in four countries between 1990 and 1999
The given line graph depicts the number of
thefts
per thousand vehicles in four countries(Great Britain, Sweden, France and Canada), over a nine-year period between 1990 and 1999.
Overall
, It can be seen that Great Britain had the highest number of car thefts
in
all time. Change preposition
of
However
, Sweden approached Great Britain at
the end with Change preposition
in
significant
increase. Add an article
a significant
Although
, France and Canada have decreased.
In 1990, in Sweden, the number of car thefts
was approximantly
8 per 1000 vehicles. Next 6 years it increased steadily. After Correct your spelling
approximately
that
it was stable at 12 between 1996 and 1998.
In 1999 it considerably increased to 14.
Add a comma
that,
Finally
, Canada had 7 thefts
per 100 transports at the start. Nevertheless
, it droped
to 5 in 1993. After itCorrect your spelling
dropped
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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