The bar graph below shows the volume of fish and seafood consumed in Spain from 2008 to 2021, by sales format. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar graph below shows the volume of fish and seafood consumed in Spain from 2008 to 2021, by sales format. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The column graph illustrates the expenditure of two countries (France and the UK) on consumer goods
such
as cars, computers, books, perfume, and cameras in 2010 with clear pounds sterling.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the vehicles had a higher interest rate among customers' sales than the other products.
While
the lowest pounds sterling was perfume in the given countries.
According to
the given information, the citizens in Britsh country had the highest waste of money on motors with around 450,000£
then
the book sales came in second category with above 400,000.
In addition
, the cameras and the computers had almost the same expenditure on customers' needs which was approximately 350,000£.
On the other hand
, the people who lived in France had a significant desire for vans with 400,000 of money
then
computers, books, perfume, and cameras by 380,000£, 300,000£, 200,000£, and 150,000£ respectively.
To conclude
, both nations had different expenditures on consumer goods
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