The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the Qatari and Omani import totals (in tons) for several types of vegetables in 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the total number of several types of vegetables imported by two different countries which were Qatar and Omani in 1990.
Overall
, Qatar needed
spinach
more than other commodities.
While
,
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garlic
in Omani became the highest demand over the year shown. Looking at the information in detail, it can be seen that
spinach
demanding
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in Qatar was around 450
tones
during 1990 followed by
garlic
and ginger in the second and third positions respectively.
By contrast
, only 150 tonnes of peas
brought
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from outside
nation
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and it was threefold lower than
spinach
.
In addition
, 220
tones
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of broccoli consumption came from foreign. In 1990, Oman paid 800
tones
of
garlic
and 600
tones
for
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spinach
. Brocolli and ginger accounted for respective 300
tones
, twofold as small as
garlic
. These vegetables
therefore
were the smallest compared with other commodities. Peas from international farmers sold in Oman in 1990
by
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total
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400
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of 400
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tonnes.
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