The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information 

Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make 

comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
Overall
,
in
Change the preposition
at
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the beginning of the period , By telephone was highest and In person was lowest In comparison,
number
Correct article usage
the number
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of inquiries received by the Tourist Information
at the end
of the period, In person was the most and By telephone
was
Unnecessary verb
apply
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the least number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information
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