The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The
two
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maps illustrate the comparison of route access to the
City
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Hospital and indicate its
road
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reconstructions in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
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, the illustration shows that there are some constructive changes over time. They had been added various facilities and amenities like extra parking lots,
Bus
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Stations, Staff car parks, and
two
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roundabouts had been built. in 2007, the
City
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Hospital was rounded by a Ring
Road
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and there was a straight
entrance
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road
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that connected the
city
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road
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to the
City
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Hospital and a compact transportation vehicle park area on the East side of the
entrance
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. The vehicle park had to include both staff and public car parks.
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, there were 6
bus
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stops on both sides of the entry. In 2010, after reconstructions, staff and public car spots turned into
two
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separate spots, one of them located on the East side of the
City
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Hospital and the other one built across the
entrance
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road
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in the East.
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, all old
Bus
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Stops renovated into a
Bus
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Station in the left wing of the
entrance
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, and
two
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roundabouts have been constructed.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, city, road, bus, entrance with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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