The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
two
maps illustrate the comparison of route access to the Use synonyms
City
Hospital and indicate its Use synonyms
road
reconstructions in 2007 and 2010.
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Overall
, the illustration shows that there are some constructive changes over time. They had been added various facilities and amenities like extra parking lots, Linking Words
Bus
Stations, Staff car parks, and Use synonyms
two
roundabouts had been built.
in 2007, the Use synonyms
City
Hospital was rounded by a Ring Use synonyms
Road
and there was a straight Use synonyms
entrance
Use synonyms
road
that connected the Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
road
to the Use synonyms
City
Hospital and a compact transportation vehicle park area on the East side of the Use synonyms
entrance
. The vehicle park had to include both staff and public car parks. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there were 6 Linking Words
bus
stops on both sides of the entry.
In 2010, after reconstructions, staff and public car spots turned into Use synonyms
two
separate spots, one of them located on the East side of the Use synonyms
City
Hospital and the other one built across the Use synonyms
entrance
Use synonyms
road
in the East. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, all old Linking Words
Bus
Stops renovated into a Use synonyms
Bus
Station in the left wing of the Use synonyms
entrance
, and Use synonyms
two
roundabouts have been constructed.Use synonyms
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