The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
two
maps illustrate the comparison of route access to the City
Hospital and indicate its road
reconstructions in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the illustration shows that there are some constructive changes over time. They had been added various facilities and amenities like extra parking lots, Bus
Stations, Staff car parks, and two
roundabouts had been built.
in 2007, the City
Hospital was rounded by a Ring Road
and there was a straight entrance
road
that connected the city
road
to the City
Hospital and a compact transportation vehicle park area on the East side of the entrance
. The vehicle park had to include both staff and public car parks. Moreover
, there were 6 bus
stops on both sides of the entry.
In 2010, after reconstructions, staff and public car spots turned into two
separate spots, one of them located on the East side of the City
Hospital and the other one built across the entrance
road
in the East. Furthermore
, all old Bus
Stops renovated into a Bus
Station in the left wing of the entrance
, and two
roundabouts have been constructed.Submitted by neginsepahvand on
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