The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The
two
maps illustrate the comparison of route access to the
City
Hospital and indicate its
road
reconstructions in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the illustration shows that there are some constructive changes over time. They had been added various facilities and amenities like extra parking lots,
Bus
Stations, Staff car parks, and
two
roundabouts had been built. in 2007, the
City
Hospital was rounded by a Ring
Road
and there was a straight
entrance
road
that connected the
city
road
to the
City
Hospital and a compact transportation vehicle park area on the East side of the
entrance
. The vehicle park had to include both staff and public car parks.
Moreover
, there were 6
bus
stops on both sides of the entry. In 2010, after reconstructions, staff and public car spots turned into
two
separate spots, one of them located on the East side of the
City
Hospital and the other one built across the
entrance
road
in the East.
Furthermore
, all old
Bus
Stops renovated into a
Bus
Station in the left wing of the
entrance
, and
two
roundabouts have been constructed.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words two, city, road, bus, entrance with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • improvements
  • facilitate
  • congestion
  • junctions
  • streamline
  • traffic flow
  • reduce congestion
  • public transport
  • bus station
  • efficiency
  • accessibility
  • parking facilities
  • car park
  • designated
  • alleviate
  • issues
  • adequate space
  • enhancements
  • overall accessibility
  • traffic management
  • convenience
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