The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates Switzerland's birth and
death
rates during the period 1970 to 2020. This
data is obtained from United Nations statistics.
It is obvious that Switzerland's births had a gradual increase from 1970 to the end of the year 2020. While
the death
rate
decreased slightly from the middle of the period to the end of 2020.
Turning to births, the largest rate
of birth was in 2020 which reached a peak at more than three million
. However
, death
people were just under one million
in the same year.
At the start of the period, the lowest rate
of Switzerland births in 1970 with little more than one million
, while
the death
rate
was exactly one million
.
In the year 1995, the peak of death
individuals reached a high of 1.5 million
. In 2020, United Nations statistics indicated a huge difference between deaths and breaths.Submitted by rajaa.albriki on
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