Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly a question of luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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believe that effort and natural talent are the other aspects partly counted for achievement.
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, you pass the exam completely and achieve your aims in score.
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who are sensitive to numbers and have analytical thinking will potentially succeed in the accounting field. If you are not talented, you have to put in a lot of effort and be hard-working. A typical shining example who passed the underprivileged and went up to the peak of success is Nick Vujicic, a disabled person who overcame difficulties and now becomes an inspirational motivation not only for disabled Use synonyms
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task achievement
Your essay provides a clear and complete response to the task. However, ensure that all points are fully developed for a higher score.
coherence cohesion
To improve coherence, use more varied transitional phrases to connect your ideas smoothly.
task achievement
Try to add more specific examples or evidence to fully support your main points.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are well-written and make your position on the topic clear.
task achievement
Your ideas are clear and comprehensive, making your argument easy to follow.
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You provided a relevant and relatable example of Nick Vujicic to support your argument.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite