Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
A small number of
people
think that highly trained professionals
should be required to work in the same country
where they did their training, but most people
disagree with this
. This
essay will also
disagree, suggesting that they should be free to work where they want.
To begin
with, it is understandable that people
might argue in favour of professionals
working in the country
where they trained because in some cases that country
has paid for their training. Take, for example
, a doctor who received medical training at the government’s expense in a relatively poor country
. If they moved to another country
, perhaps in order to earn a higher salary, then
the government’s investment would have been wasted.
However
, there are a few problems with that viewpoint. First of all, professionals
of this
nature usually pay for their own education, and so if they were required to stay in that country
then
it would be unfair. A lot of people
invest in their education purely to gain the chance of moving
to another Change preposition
to move
country
for a better life. Then
, of course, there is the argument that all people
should have some freedom of movement. Particularly in the case of highly trained professionals
, who can bring value to different societies, it is beneficial to have them move around the world, sharing their skills and increasing diversity. Perhaps they ought to give something back to the society in which they were trained, but they should not be restricted by any law because that would be a violation of their fundamental rights.
In conclusion, people
who have important skills should be free to move to other countries if they wish. They should not have a legal obligation to stay in the nation where they earned their skills, but perhaps for the sake of decency
they might consider staying a short Add a comma
decency,
while
and giving back to that society.Submitted by habal.oumaima on
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relevant specific examples
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clear comprehensive ideas
Ensure your ideas are thoroughly developed. Expanding on the impact of professional migration on both the home and host countries can provide additional depth.
task achievement
You presented both viewpoints clearly and provided a well-supported opinion.
introduction conclusion present
The introduction and conclusion are effectively written and give a solid structure to your essay.
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Your opinion
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