Some people feel that learning a foreign languageis an essential component of a child's education. Others feel that learning a foreign language is often a waste of time that can be better spent on learning technologyand other vocational subjects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In
this
day and age, several schools around the world always focus on language
subjects
and vocational subjects
. However
, some people
think that language
subjects
do not impact children
when compared with technology
and vocational because nowadays is a globalization era. In my opinion, both subjects
are essential for living as well and it depends on what children
are interested in and their future work.
To begin
with, a foreign language
is better to know a foreign language
than a mother language
even if it isn't used much in daily life
it enhances communication capabilities. Furthermore
, it can used to make friends with other countries not only in their home countries and it is also
easy to have a connection with a lot of people
. In addition
, foreign languages are related to numerous jobs for instance
, ambassador, pilot, air hostess and even engineer because is have to communicate with other people
as mentioned on top and when they have a chance to work in foreign countries is most impactful with their life
and work.
On the other hand
, technology
and vocational subjects
are also
important because in this
generation technology
is developing the world and today's large of people
use technology
in daily life
and currently have plenty of careers. Even so, vocational subjects
and technology
can be good choices for children
who have a passion for it. Moreover
, some children
that interested in technology
in the future may be their can create new machines or materials that can affect with education system or any system likewise
, vocational subjects
that good for children
who early know about their passion for any career.
To sum up
, every subject is important for life
and it depends on children
's interests . Meanwhile, parents should support even children
who have a passion different from their own view because the main essential is support from family.Submitted by np.napatping on
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task response
The essay responds to the task and discusses both views adequately but could provide a clearer stance. Make sure to explicitly state your opinion and ensure it is evident throughout your essay.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure is generally clear, but make sure to avoid some repetition and maintain flow between paragraphs. Use transitional words or phrases to improve coherence.
task response
Try to provide more specific examples that clearly support your main points. This will create stronger arguments and demonstrate in-depth understanding of the topic.
task response
Review grammar and vocabulary usage to reduce errors. This will make your arguments more compelling and easier to understand. Consider simplifying longer sentences for clarity.
coherence cohesion
The introduction and conclusion are present and summarize the essay's main points.
task response
The essay considers both views on the topic, which helps in presenting a balanced discussion.
coherence cohesion
There is an understanding of the basic requirements of essay organization, with distinct paragraphs for different points.