The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
The process diagram below illustrates the making of
plastic
bottles
.
Overall
, it is a 9-stage, man-made, cycle process. It begins with throwing trash bottles
bottles
into the bin and adding no raw materials and the ninth stage of this
finished as producing end products.
The trash truck collects all the bottles
and gives them to the recycling centre to sort them.
After dividing by group, all things are compressed into blocks and crushed by a gear machine. All the pieces get clear in water and washed by humans.
After drying, all pieces of bottles
go to the machine as plastic
pellets to be smaller than were. Plastic
pellets are produced from the plastic
pellets a raw material which will dry a second time. In the pre-last
stage, humans make a lot of raw materials such
as towels, and clothes. So, in the end, from raw materials which I mentioned, there are a lot of items which are used more in our such
as a t-shirt and plastic
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