The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.
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The process diagram below illustrates the making of
plastic
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bottles
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.
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, it is a 9-stage, man-made, cycle process. It begins with throwing trash
bottles
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bottles
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into the bin and adding no raw materials and the ninth stage of
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finished as producing end products. The trash truck collects all the
bottles
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and gives them to the recycling centre to sort them. After dividing by group, all things are compressed into blocks and crushed by a gear machine. All the pieces get clear in water and washed by humans. After drying, all pieces of
bottles
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go to the machine as
plastic
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pellets to be smaller than were.
Plastic
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pellets are produced from the
plastic
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pellets a raw material which will dry a second time. In the pre-
last
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stage, humans make a lot of raw materials
such
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as towels, and clothes. So, in the end, from raw materials which I mentioned, there are a lot of items which are used more in our
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as a t-shirt and
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dish./
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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