the graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph shows data about the annual income of four different cafes in New York for the previous year. There are two basic general trends, which are downward and upward. As regards the

first,

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the earnings for The Tea Room, were down over the annum, falling significantly from almost $160,000 earnings a month to just under $50,000 in December.

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, the sales of the other three cafes went up by varying degrees. There was a rise in Cafe Cool's sales over the first ten months, followed by a sudden increase to $120,000.

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, the profit for both Internet Express and the Wifi-Cafe

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ended the year up in December. The former experienced a steady fall to June, but after that, sales rose steadily, ending the year at approximately $130,000.

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, the trend for the Wi-Fi café was upward which in between January and July, profit doubled from $50,000 to nearly $100,000 and

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rocketed to around $190,000. It is noticeable that the income for The Tea Room is lower in the winter months than for the other three cafes.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

180 words

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the graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

In the past, many people got married when they were very young, but today, many people do not get married until later. Why do you think they do this, and is it a good or a bad idea?

Men and women are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. For this reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?