the graph shows the income of four cafes in New York over last year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows data about the annual income of four different cafes in New York for the previous year.
There are two basic general trends, which are downward and upward. As regards the
first,
the earnings for The Tea Room, were down over the annum, falling significantly from almost $160,000 earnings a month to just under $50,000 in December. Linking Words
By contrast
, the sales of the other three cafes went up by varying degrees.
There was a rise in Cafe Cool's sales over the first ten months, followed by a sudden increase to $120,000. Linking Words
Furthermore
, the profit for both Internet Express and the Wifi-Cafe Linking Words
also
ended the year up in December. The former experienced a steady fall to June, but after that, sales rose steadily, ending the year at approximately $130,000. Linking Words
Likewise
, the trend for the Wi-Fi café was upward which in between January and July, profit doubled from $50,000 to nearly $100,000 and Linking Words
then
rocketed to around $190,000. It is noticeable that the income for The Tea Room is lower in the winter months than for the other three cafes.Linking Words
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