The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of gorillas in the wild between 1990 and 2015.
The vertical bar chart provides changes in the maximum number of
gorillas
in the wild from 1990 to 2015. The diagram shows the population of gorillas
in seven different countries, including the Central African Republic, Rwanda, and Nigeria, in 1990 and 2015.
Overall
, it can be seen that there were more gorillas
in the wild in 1990 than in 2015.
In 1990, the most gorillas
were in Uganda with about 8000 species, followed by the Central African Republic with just over 5000. Furthermore
, the population of gorillas
was about the same in Rwanda and Nigeria, nearly 2500. Then
, the other three countries, such
as Gabon, Cameroon, and Angola, had roughly the same number of these creatures.
The statistics in 2015 were nearly the same as in 1990. Most of the gorillas
lived in Uganda with roughly 7500. After Uganda, as in 1990, the Central African Republic was the second highest with just under 5000. By contrast
, Nigeria was the third with about 2500, and the other four countries had nearly the same variety of gorillas
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