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The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of gorillas in the wild between 1990 and 2015.

The graph below shows the changes in the maximum number of gorillas in the wild between 1990 and 2015.
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The vertical bar chart provides changes in the maximum number of
gorillas
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 in the wild from 1990 to 2015. The diagram shows the population of
gorillas
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 in seven different countries, including the Central African Republic, Rwanda, and Nigeria, in 1990 and 2015.
Overall
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, it can be seen that there were more
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 in the wild in 1990 than in 2015. In 1990, the most
gorillas
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 were in Uganda with about 8000 species, followed by the Central African Republic with just over 5000.
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, the population of
gorillas
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 was about the same in Rwanda and Nigeria, nearly 2500.
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, the other three countries,
such
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 as Gabon, Cameroon, and Angola, had roughly the same number of these creatures. The statistics in 2015 were nearly the same as in 1990. Most of the
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 lived in Uganda with roughly 7500. After Uganda, as in 1990, the Central African Republic was the second highest with just under 5000.
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, Nigeria was the third with about 2500, and the other four countries had nearly the same variety of
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gorillas with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "roughly" was used 2 times.
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