the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and 

amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 

1920 and 2019. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and 

make comparisons where relevant.
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The first line graph compares the proportions of three electrical
appliances
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(washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner), and the other graph shows the number of
hours
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spent doing household chores per week in relation to owning these
appliances
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. Both charts present the data from 1920 to 2019.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the ownership of all three
appliances
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has increased over the given period,
while
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the number of
hours
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dedicated to household work has
also
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significantly minimized. Looking at the first chart, in 1920, nearly one-fourth of homes owned washing machines to wash clothes, about one-third of them owned refrigerators too, and a small minority (just about 1%) of them had vacuum cleaners.
However
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, 40
years
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later, the ownership of cleaners rose exponentially, and nearly nine out of 10 families had vacuum cleaners,
similarly
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one-sixth owned refrigerators. In the following
years
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, the ownership of all of them continued to increase.
On the other hand
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, it is evident that when people started purchasing
appliances
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, the average household effort started to decline. So in 1920, the average family spent 50
hours
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of their week doing routine chores,
this
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figure has considerably decreased over the
years
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. In 1960, the
hours
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were reduced to nearly 15.
Similarly
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, as the
years
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passed, the figure continued to fall, and to its lowest in 2019 at a mere 10.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "similarly".
Vocabulary: Replace the words appliances, hours, years with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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