The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The line graph below illustrates the amount of new and old, which are opened and closed respectively, with the range 2011 and 2018.
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Overall
, the number
of shops
which closures was a leader every year, except in 2011.
The number
of opening shops
fell dramatically from 2011 to 2012 and started to increase until 2014, with 4000 shops
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was bigger than openings shops
approximately for 2000 number of
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shops
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index fluctuated from 2012 to 2014 with between 6000 and 7000 amount of shops
and decreased dramatically until 2015 and had less than 1000 shops
.
Openings shops
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the
number
of shops
in 2012 and in 2015, between this
year it fluctuated from a range of 4000 and slightly more than 6000 this
figure did not rise or down between 2015 and 2016, but fell to 3000 number of
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shops
in 2018. While
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dramatically until 2016 and had 5000 Correct your spelling
rose
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shops
in 3 years, more precisely in 2016, 2017 and 2018.Submitted by bizhanalikhan6 on
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