the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

the diagram below shows the  process for recycling plastic bottles
the provided diagram illustrates the process
of
Change preposition
by
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which
plastic
bottles
recycled
Add a missing verb
are recycled
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.
Overall
this
process will take nine steps, Firslty a man collects the
plastic
bottles
from the recycle pin,
then
we put the
bottles
in the big truck, after
that is
sorting the
bottles
if they are valid to recycle or not,
step
4 a compressor take the
plastic
transform it into big blocks,
next,
a crusher take the blocks and get the
plastic
washed which will make the big block a small pellet,
following
this
a grinder take the
plastic
pellets and make them more smaller,
thereafter
heat the pellets, afterwards, raw material came after heating,
step
9 is the final
step
, producing end products. In the end,
this
is the process for recycling
plastic
bottles
which
it took
Wrong verb form
takes
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nine steps starting from taking the
plastic
bottles
from the recycle pin and the
last
step
is producing end products.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, step with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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