the diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles

the diagram below shows the  process for recycling plastic bottles
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the provided diagram illustrates the process
of
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which
plastic
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bottles
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recycled
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.
Overall
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this
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process will take nine steps, Firslty a man collects the
plastic
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bottles
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from the recycle pin,
then
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we put the
bottles
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in the big truck, after
that is
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sorting the
bottles
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if they are valid to recycle or not,
step
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4 a compressor take the
plastic
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transform it into big blocks,
next,
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a crusher take the blocks and get the
plastic
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washed which will make the big block a small pellet,
following
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this
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a grinder take the
plastic
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pellets and make them more smaller,
thereafter
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heat the pellets, afterwards, raw material came after heating,
step
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9 is the final
step
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, producing end products. In the end,
this
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is the process for recycling
plastic
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bottles
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which
it took
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nine steps starting from taking the
plastic
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bottles
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from the recycle pin and the
last
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step
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is producing end products.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words plastic, bottles, step with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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