The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the percentage of the 65s people in three different countries from 1940 to 2040. The countries are
Japan
, Sweden, and the United States.
It can be clearly seen that the USA and Sweden had a fluctuation; however
, they will end up in
their own peak after 100 years. Change preposition
at
Japan
, on the other hand
, is predicted to have a surge and will became
the highest percentage of Change the verb form
become
65s
Correct your spelling
65's
population
in 2040.
Japan
had only 5% of older people in their country in 1940, then
it kept decrease
until roughly in 1990. Wrong verb form
decreasing
Japan
Change noun form
Japan's
population
had a gradual growth until around 2020. Afterward
, it is expected to have a surge and will reach its peak Change the spelling
Afterwards
on
2040, with more than a quarter of Change preposition
in
population
.
In spite of the growth among the three countries, the USA and Sweden, where it used to be higher than Add an article
the population
Japan
, are estimated to have less than 25% and just upper 25% of 65s people population
, respectively.Submitted by rasyidrahma13 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "surge" was used 2 times.
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