The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the percentage of the 65s people in three different countries from 1940 to 2040. The countries are
Japan
, Sweden, and the United States. It can be clearly seen that the USA and Sweden had a fluctuation;
however
, they will end up
in
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their own peak after 100 years.
Japan
,
on the other hand
, is predicted to have a surge and will
became
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the highest percentage of
65s
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65's
population
in 2040.
Japan
had only 5% of older people in their country in 1940,
then
it kept
decrease
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until roughly in 1990.
Japan
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population
had a gradual growth until around 2020.
Afterward
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, it is expected to have a surge and will reach its peak
on
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2040, with more than a quarter of
population
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the population
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. In spite of the growth among the three countries, the USA and Sweden, where it used to be higher than
Japan
, are estimated to have less than 25% and just upper 25% of 65s people
population
, respectively.
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