a museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some vulntary unpaid work at the museum. write a letter to the museum director to apply to the voluntary unpaid work. in your later. explain why you want to do voluntary unpaid work at the museu,. describe some eskill and qualities you have that would be useful. give detail of when you would be available for work.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding the part-time position available at the Museum of Contemporaneous Art. My name is Gonzalo Ezequiel Fuentes, a contemporary arts student and
also
an entrepreneur artist.
First of all, I am a contemporaneous artist who has dedicated my life to keeping art alive, at the moment, due to
being in the last
semester of my career, less physical presence at the university is required. I have some free time during my afternoons, so I believe that a part-time position would suit me perfectly.
Secondly
, I will explain why this
position would line up with my skills and experience in this
area. As a contemporaneous artist, I have developed plenty of skills and knowledge in this
topic so I could guide the visitors and explain every sector of the museum.
I hope to hear back from you soon.
I would very much appreciate your consideration of my application.
Yours faithfully,
Gonzalo E FuentesSubmitted by jimeilaria on
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You have successfully addressed the main points of the task. However, try to elaborate more on your skills and how they are specifically relevant to the museum work. Also, provide more specific details about your availability to make your letter more compelling.
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Your writing tone is polite and suitable for a formal letter, which strengthens your application.
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The structure of your letter is well-organized with clear paragraphs, making it easy to follow your thoughts.
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You have effectively included both a greeting and closing, maintaining the formal letter structure.