The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in household in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting the relevant and main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in household in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting the relevant and main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The upper
chart
illustrates the percentages of
ownership
of three kinds of electrical home appliances over the period of 1920 to 2019. The lower
chart
displays the number of hours for doing house chores per week during the same time.
Overall
, we can observe that as the percentage of electrical appliance
ownership
has increased, the amount of time that individuals should spend doing housework decreased dramatically. From 1920 until 2019.
According to
the first line
chart
, in 1920, the percentage of refrigerators
ownership
was at the bottom of the list and the washing machine had the first record.
However
,
this
ranking reversed over time and in 1980,
ownership
of refrigerators rose significantly to almost 100%.
Also
, the percentage of
ownership
of vacuum cleaners had a significant rise too and in 2019 its rank was exactly like refrigerators. The second
chart
shows us that in 1920, individuals spent 50 hours each week doing house chores which is the highest amount among these years.
This
number
then
started to dwindle year after year until it stopped at 10 hours a week in 2019.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, ownership with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • electrical appliances
  • household
  • percentage
  • refrigerator
  • vacuum cleaner
  • washing machine
  • steady increase
  • significant decrease
  • correlation
  • housework
  • number of hours
  • per week
  • period
  • rise
  • reach
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