The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. 

Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The line graphs illustrate the total
number
of tourists visiting different parts of the world in a 15-year period with a 5-year interval.
This
data is represented in millions.
Overall
,
it is clear that
North
America
had the most visitors throughout the period,
while
Central and Eastern
Europe
had the greatest positive changes in
number
of visitors in 15 years. Meanwhile, the remains saw a gradual incline in a lower
number
. In 1990, the total
number
of visitors in North
America
was 70
million
, which was higher than Central and Eastern
Europe
, with 30
million
.
However
,
according to
the dramatic rise of Central and Eastern
Europe
, both had the same total
number
at
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roughly 85
million
at the end
.
In contrast
, Sub-Saharan Africa and South
America
were the least popular with under 10
million
in 1990, followed by a gradual incline, reaching 20 and 15
million
by 2005, respectively. South-East Asia began with 20
million
at the start and increased consistently to 35
million
before surging to above 40
million
at the end
. In conclusion,
Although
both North
America
and Central and Eastern
Europe
were the most popular for travelling
at the end
of a given period, Central and Eastern
Europe
started with relatively lower. In comparison, the others experienced minimal growth in tourism.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, america, europe, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • international tourist arrivals
  • insight
  • trend
  • significant
  • fluctuation
  • statistic
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • surge
  • data point
  • comparative
  • quantitative analysis
  • economic factor
  • political stability
  • tourism sector
  • global event
  • destination popularity
  • benchmark
  • year-on-year change
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