The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
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The line graphs illustrate the total
number
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of tourists visiting different parts of the world in a 15-year period with a 5-year interval.
This
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data is represented in millions.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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North
America
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had the most visitors throughout the period,
while
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Central and Eastern
Europe
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had the greatest positive changes in
number
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of visitors in 15 years. Meanwhile, the remains saw a gradual incline in a lower
number
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. In 1990, the total
number
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of visitors in North
America
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was 70
million
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, which was higher than Central and Eastern
Europe
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, with 30
million
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.
However
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,
according to
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the dramatic rise of Central and Eastern
Europe
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, both had the same total
number
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at
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of
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roughly 85
million
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at the end
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.
In contrast
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, Sub-Saharan Africa and South
America
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were the least popular with under 10
million
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in 1990, followed by a gradual incline, reaching 20 and 15
million
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by 2005, respectively. South-East Asia began with 20
million
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at the start and increased consistently to 35
million
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before surging to above 40
million
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at the end
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. In conclusion,
Although
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both North
America
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and Central and Eastern
Europe
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were the most popular for travelling
at the end
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of a given period, Central and Eastern
Europe
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started with relatively lower. In comparison, the others experienced minimal growth in tourism.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, america, europe, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • international tourist arrivals
  • insight
  • trend
  • significant
  • fluctuation
  • statistic
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady growth
  • decline
  • surge
  • data point
  • comparative
  • quantitative analysis
  • economic factor
  • political stability
  • tourism sector
  • global event
  • destination popularity
  • benchmark
  • year-on-year change
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