The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The line graphs illustrate the total
number
of tourists visiting different parts of the world in a 15-year period with a 5-year interval. This
data is represented in millions.
Overall
, it is clear that
North America
had the most visitors throughout the period, while
Central and Eastern Europe
had the greatest positive changes in number
of visitors in 15 years. Meanwhile, the remains saw a gradual incline in a lower number
.
In 1990, the total number
of visitors in North America
was 70 million
, which was higher than Central and Eastern Europe
, with 30 million
. However
, according to
the dramatic rise of Central and Eastern Europe
, both had the same total number
at
roughly 85 Change preposition
of
million
at the end
. In contrast
, Sub-Saharan Africa and South America
were the least popular with under 10 million
in 1990, followed by a gradual incline, reaching 20 and 15 million
by 2005, respectively. South-East Asia began with 20 million
at the start and increased consistently to 35 million
before surging to above 40 million
at the end
.
In conclusion, Although
both North America
and Central and Eastern Europe
were the most popular for travelling at the end
of a given period, Central and Eastern Europe
started with relatively lower. In comparison, the others experienced minimal growth in tourism.Submitted by sippakorn.wet on
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