Many museums charge for admission fee while entering. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums

are educational places which are beneficial for

people

in societies.

However

, these days,

people

have to pay an entrance fee to enter a considerable number of

museums

.

Although

this

phenomenon can lead to negative effects, I believe that there are more important positive effects. It cannot be denied that the price of tickets can bring about detrimental impacts

to

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people

, societies, and

museums

themselves. From

people

’s perspective, they are discouraged from visiting

museums

and are not able to access useful information and knowledge freely. Particularly, the poor because they cannot afford

such

great amounts. From society’s perspective, citizens have fewer opportunities to access vitally significant places to learn history, science, art, and many other essential subjects. From

museums

’ perspective, they cannot attain one of their objectives - to educate

people

. Naturally, they may have to close down as they lose more of their customers.

However

, despite the aforementioned disadvantages, I am convinced that charging for admission figures brings about a myriad of advantages.

Firstly

,

museums

will have sufficient sums of money to operate, which covers their business overhead,

such

as personnel costs, equipment, electricity and water bills.

This

can in turn lead

museums

to develop more and implement many recent innovations to serve better.

Secondly

,

museums

can generate their own revenue to improve the place effectively to attract

people

,

for example

, to update their exhibits and keep the place clean and good-looking. Having visited many

museums

, many experienced travellers consider that many

museums

which sell tickets are better than those that do not charge for tickets in terms of places, information, and management. One more benefit is that charging entry fees can lessen the burden of the government in terms of funding

museums

. Doing so can enable the government to allocate more amounts to other important public areas

such

as medicine, education and welfare. In conclusion,

although

I recognize that museum ticket sales can cause drawbacks to stakeholders in societies, I believe that

museums

should not remain free for all so as to operate and develop more effectively.