The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the information that number of
enquiries
received by three various mode
of communication Change to a plural noun
modes
such
as in person, by letter/email and by telephone
at tourist
information office Add an article
the tourist
at
a city over a Change preposition
in
six month
period from Add a hyphen
six-month
January
to June
in
2011.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, the office received the most enquiries
by in person
mode of communication and the least Add a hyphen
in-person
enquiries
was
Change the verb form
were
the
by Correct article usage
apply
telephone
.
In detail, in
the beginning of the period, which is Change the preposition
at
January
enquiries
was
around 410 Change the verb form
were
by
person and it Change preposition
per
was
increased slightly by 200 from Unnecessary verb
apply
february
to match Change the capitalization
February
then
it doubled by 400 from match until may
, it Capitalize the word
May
was
reached the highest number of Unnecessary verb
apply
enquiries
in June
month, which is 1900. Furthermore
, on
Change preposition
in
January
, by letter/ email and by telephone
had 700 and 900 enquiries
respectively. After that by letter/email was decreased mildly until march
, at 650 and there was a gradual shrink from match to Capitalize word
March
may
, from 650 to 370 and it remained stable until Capitalize word
May
may
.
Capitalize the word
May
In contrast
, by
Change preposition
apply
telephone
enquiries
was
the highest number of Correct subject-verb agreement
were
enquiries
than others in January
, at 900 and there was a fluctation
and up and down trend from Correct your spelling
fluctuation
January
to match, from 900 to 1000, it remained stable until April, at 1000. There was a moderate increase from April to June
and it was
reached 1600 Unnecessary verb
apply
on
Change preposition
in
June
month.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 77%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words enquiries, telephone, january, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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