The charts below show the results of a survey conducted by a university library to find out the opinions of full-time and part-time students about its services.
The given diagrams illustrate the satisfaction of full-time and part-time
students
in percentages with the technological support
supplied by a university and the working time.
Overall
, most of the students
, both
full-time and part-time, are very satisfied with the opening hours whereas
more full-time students
feel very happy with the help from IT supporters of the college, compared with part-time ones. Moreover
, it is obvious from the charts that opening hours is
of more favour compared to IT Change the verb form
are
support
.
Looking at the charts about satisfaction proportion in technological assistance, it can be seen that most full-time students
feel very pleased and quite pleased with that support
, at 55% and 32%, respectively. Only 13% of full-time ones feel unpleased with the aid. On the contrary
, nearly half of the part-time apprentices are not satisfied with the help from the IT team, at 45%, which is followed by the rate of learners who think the help is quite useful, at 35%, while
only 20% of them believe that the assistance is very useful. It is apparent that more full-time students
are happy with the IT support
compared with the part-time ones.
Regarding the current working time, the majority of both
full-time and part-time students
feel very satisfied with it, at 67% and 72%, respectively. The proportion of quite satisfied learners is 32% with the prior and 23% with the latter, whereas
the rate of students
who are unhappy at all in both
groups is insignificant, not pass 5% in both
. Obviously, more students
are satisfied with opening hours compared with IT support
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